Jane+S

Jenny C

I really like your circus theme!! I think its very creative. I like the elephant doing ...something... It tells that its a circus but I think it would have been much better eventhough it is really good now but it could have been much better if you added more drawings that tell that it is a circus! Also I really like your street fashion pictures and the stars. But I dont get the picture on the right ... it could have been better if its another street fashion picture!! Except for those 2, I like your artwork a LOT!!

Sophie L Your circus theme is really creative! First of all, I think that the colors you chose really suit your theme. Also, the pictures you added seem surreal (because the people are so small!^^) and it fits well with your circus theme too. One negative thing (because I have to. Sorry T^T) is that I couldn't really tell where your light source is; you didn't really add enough values to your shading. Finally, I think that if you added more circus-y stuff (like clowns, horses, etc.) you're drawing would be even better. BUT! your drawing is amazing!!! I LOVE it!

Jung L

Your collage is rally well done with all the mysterious people in the background. The best part about your drawing i think was the stairs and elephant, the one with the sexy eyes!!!! Your stairs really made your picture look "STAR CIRCUS" sign very 3D in a way because it looks like it's going further in the the back. The way you cut the windows out really made your walls look really nice the black and white thingi in the back ground as your wall paper. If I had to find something negative about your drawing, it would be the random person in the black and red sweater, she looks kinda of lost just standing there, in a crooked way. For constructive saying, I would just say, just be a little neater with your pencil smudges when you use really dark pencil to colour in big areas. Besides that, your drawing is really eye capturing, and neatly messy :p

Janice K It's really good!!!!! I like the colors and the circus theme which is super cute :). Everything somehow connects to each other like how you picked out the magazine collages, organizing them in the star windows, that looks brightly colored and attracting!! The only thing that could maybe use a little work on is the neatness of the colored pencil marks that could be smoothened out. All of it is fine so don't worry too much! It's perfect x100.

Natalie H I really like your collage and your theme!! "the Circus" Anyways, the people you cut out somehow fit well with your room and surreal in someways. I also really like the elephant you drew with the ball. The things you might want to change are including the light source and maybe coloring more neatly. The floor looks a little but messy. But your room is really really really interesting!!!!!:):):):)

Christine Soyoon K: Hi Jane! : ) This room is so cute! I love the circus theme and the little elephant at the bottom of the picture, its really creative! I also liked the way that you cut out the windows as stars. And, I liked the checkerboard ceiling and walls, its awesome :). The magazine cutouts are really cute and stuff and they make sense with the rest of your room. But maybe you could work a bit more on the shading and making the furniture in your room look more 3-D. :D Maybe you could choose a specific light source so that you could make the bleachers look more realistic and stuff. And also, maybe you could smooth out the pencil marks a little bit, then it'll be perfect! But all in all, I really like your project, its great

Hyun Jun L The good things about your picture are first, I like your way to cut your famous objects. Second, I like the design of your windows; it was very creative. However, you should color the background, especially the word ‘star circus’ more clearly because the white parts of your drawing is degrading the whole picture.