Jenny+C

Jane S i dont know why but i think the girl on the right side of your collage was really creative! I also liked how you drew the lanterns attached to the ceiling over the windows, cut them out, and pasted them over your magazine pictures! I think it would have been a bit better if you colored the background with more darker tones! But it was still really good and i like ur artwork!!(: haha i also love your sign:-D

Natalie H I really like the your collage and the floor in your room. The eyes and the girl on the right looks very surreal. The floor looks real and you can notice well that the blue thing is water. The only thing you might want to change is maybe darken your walls and and use variety of tones since you're using similar colors. Everything else looks really good:) I love it!!

Janice K Jenny! Your artwork is so pretty! The colors match (pink) and the lanterns (?) or candles are really creative that gives out the mood. The girl on the right really stands out that attracts me (?) and everything is really creative. The only thing that I would suggest is to smooth out the color pencil marks of the walls, ceilings, and more. Overall, I like this picture that you created!!! YAY :)

Jung L

I like your theme pink because it gives the person a very happy feeling, and also you have candles, lanterns, and a very cool pool. Also you have a woman that looks like she's trying to stick her leg into the pool which makes the person fell very fresh. Something that you could've fixed would've been the back ground on your collage on the left. Maybe you should've added some more objects on the red thingi, then it would've looked a bit funner. :D hee hee. Overall i really really love your colouring and your mood and tehem for your room.

SOPHIE L OMG! JENNY! YOU'RE COLLAGE IS AH-MAZING! IT REALLY LOOKS SURREAL, LIKE ONE OF DALI OR MAGRITTE'S PAINTINGS! EHMYGOD! BUT BECAUSE I HAVE TO I HAVE TO WRITE ONE NEGATIVE COMMENT! YOUR SHADING FOR YOUR PINK WALLS IS KINDA LIGHT. ONE THING YOU COULD HAVE DONE TO IMPROVE YOUR DRAWING IS ADDING MORE TONES TO ALL YOUR FURNITURE AND WALLS, BECAUSE IT'S KINDA HARD TO TELL WHERE YOUR LIGHT SOURCE IS COMING FROM. BUT ANYWAYS! GREAT JOB!!!!!^^

Christine Soyoon K Hi Jenny! ^ 0 ^ Wow, I love your project! The colors all match and set a really pleasant mood for your project. And the magazine cut-outs are arranged and fit in with your theme perfectly! I love the way you made the woman in the pink dress sit on the window sill leaning into the room :), it was really creative! I also liked the shoes and stuff stepping into the room as well. And, the eyes are really cool! But maybe to make your project better, you could maybe (maybe, just maybe), shade your walls and room a little bit neater and find a light source for your room :). But anyway, I really like your project, it's great!