Janice+K

Natalie H I really like the idea that you chose the photo studio. I think your coloring is very neat and your light source is clearly shown. Also, the collage in the windows are very surreal and interesting. The girl in the dress has many colors on the skirt which is very interesting. I think the only thing that is sort of weird are the chairs because it is sort of thin. Also, the girl's skin seems white so it sort of looks like a doll :) but it's still pretty!!! :) Anyways I really love it!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hyun Jun L The good things about your drawing is first, the setting of your drawing was very creative, and it looked very clear. Second, your collage pictures were very outstanding. Third, the coloring choices were very good. For example, your collage items had a very bright colors, which emphasizes your drawing. And next time, I think you can improve by coloring the photo studio's picture neatly because those white parts were degrading your picture.

Jenny C I LOVE your theme for this room~! Also I like your surrealism collage! Such as the car coming out of the window and the eye!! However, it could been nicer even though it is nice already, your room's value could be darker that would make the room look realistic. Also you could have did your surrealism collage with cohesive pictures,, I dont get the fruits!! But it looks yummy!! Overall, I really LOVE your artwork~ its really creative~

Christine Soyoon K Hi Janice! : ) Wow! I really liked your idea of making your room a photo-studio; it was really creative! I think you shaded and colored the room neatly and with lots of detail. The magazine cutouts looked really good with the rest of your room! But maybe (just a suggestion), you could outline your furniture and stuff in your room so that the things looks a little bit more realistic and 3-D :). Like for example, the model that’s in the photo-studio could use a bit more color and have some more tones and shades. But overall, this project is really, really good!

Jung L

Your drawing looks very peaceful and and gentle, but when you move towards rightward, it gets wild and crazy and the fruit looks really good. The lipstick looks very sexy with your red car and the white and gold thingi. The ballerina's really cute in the middle, and the eye in the ceiling gives a very scary theme. But then the ceiling gets rid of that mood. One bad thing about it was the collage you made on your left, i think i didn't really fit the drawing completely, but still looks cool. But it's still SUPER DUPER TRUPER cool!! Some constructive criticism would be to colour the shading parts a little dark so that it doesn't look like just a class project. Overall, it looks like incredibly good!!! LIKE WHAAAAAAAA!!!

Sophie L I LOVE your photo shop theme!!!! It's really creative and cool! The girl you drew is really pretty....Anyways, because I HAVE to write a negative and constructive comment....T^T SORRY. Anyways, I think that one negative thing is that your coloring is a bit too light, and I can't really see a lot of tones. For your constructive, I think that you could have made your collage more surrealistic. With the exception of the eye in the star, I think that the other pictures just look random. ANYWAYS, your drawing is awesome overall!!!! GREAT JOB!