Hyun+Jun+L

Jung L

Your drawing was very well organized and very neat and makes the viewer very calm for some reason that I have no clue of. When i see your collage, i feel very fresh because of the blue, and the yellow-looking-thing-that-looks-like-wine, also calms me down for another reason that i do not know. Your floor colouring gives your drawing a very strong look. If there was something that you could've fixed would've been the stuff below and behind the glass. They might look like just normal lines, but if the objects, besides other glasses, were bigger or smaller which ever way you want it to be, then the glass would've looked more realistic. Some constructive work would be, the room looks very squished in a way, so maybe you could've made your stuff a bit smaller if you want, but it looks pretty good from just the way it is right now.

Sophie L Wow. Your drawing is so neat! Your bold lines and dark coloring really define your "modern" theme for your room (if that is your theme...sorry if it's not^^;;). Also, your collage is very surrealistic. However, I think that you should have added more value to your furniture; it's sometimes hard to tell where your light source is. Shading is difficult, but I think that if you tried, you could have added more value. On the other hand, your idea about having the staircase in your room is very creative~^^ One thing that you could have worked on is erasing your fingerprints on your white wall(s). It kinda looks messy because you didn't erase it. BUT your drawing is still good!

Jenny C I like your modern theme room! Also the water spilling collage, I really love it! and the hand too! I love that model....zzzzz However, the top and the right wall looks empty!! You should have did the stripe wall for them too! It looks creative too but in my perspective I would like it with the stripe wall for all the walls! I think that the stairs on the floor that leads to the bottom floor looks nice.. I think its creative~Overall your artwork is really CREATIVE.

Natalie H I really really like your room!! I especially like the collage and the cabinet on the left wall. The transparent door on the cabinet is really interesting. Your collage is also really creative. The water falling in from the ceiling and the man in the wine glass is really creative!! The only thing you might want to change is the sofa and maybe color the ceiling and the right wall in the room. I think you need to make the sofa look more comfortable by changing the edges to a circular shape. But overall, the artwork is really good!!!!:)

Jane S i love your artwork! the cartoon that says money=life was so cute!(: i also love your coloring of your furniture!! one thing that you could change is like you know the orange box thingy next to the wine cup? it kinda looks that it was covered byt he wine cup!>:( but but it still SO good!(: haha good job!(:

Janice K Your work is really good! I like how the super big wine glass and the hand stands out that makes me want to observe (?) the picture even more! It attracts the eyes somehow, with the arrangement of the furniture and more.I really like the stairs the leads downstairs which shows lots of creativity!! I also like the little gray guy looking at the coin :)). The only thing that could be worked on is to try to erase the smudges that are on the white stripes of the floors or walls. It's okay! It's still really good and perfectly done!! :))

Christine Soyoon K Hi Jun! : ) Wow, your project looks great! I really like it! I think that you did your work really neatly and make the pencil marks very blended in and straight. I really like the way you arrange the magazine cut-outs of this project. The wine glass and the blue liquid pouring out of the window looks awesome. I also liked the "Money = Life" thingy on the wall! Its really cute! And the man looking out of the window looks really good positioned there and adds to the surrealism of this project. But maybe (I'm not sure...just maybe) you could have colored the right wall a bit more (?). It kind of looks empty and so do the stairs, but if you meant to keep it that way I'm sorry! It looks fine. :) And so all in all, I really like this project and think you did a good job on it!